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Project: Short story, 3,330 words

Client: Brett Butler, creative writer, United States

Service: Developmental editing and line editing

Contributions:

(1) Highlighted the story’s strengths and areas for improvement.

(2) Provided detailed comments within manuscript. Highlighted strong sections, suggested smoother phrasing, identified unnecessary detail, and asked questions to clarify plot.

Testimonial: 

Elena consistently provides insightful feedback. She thinks broadly and identifies issues with character consistency, theme development, and flow. At the same time, she gives attention to word choice and sentence-level problems. I trust Elena with all my work! — Brett Butler.