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Project: Novel, 95,000 words.

Client: Dan Ellrick, Japan

Service: Beta-reading

Contributions:

(1) Provided feedback on whether the story “worked” overall and whether the author reached his goals for the current draft.

(2) Commented on plot, pacing, character, dialogue, and inconsistencies.

Testimonial: 

Elena provided specific and insightful recommendations on plot structure, character development, word usage, and dialogue. She contributed far more than I expect from a beta reader. My book benefited greatly from her comments. — Dan Ellrick, April 2022

[For a sample of Elena’s fiction editing style, click here.]